The Witch's Brew (Witchy Lovers #1) (2024)

Was this edited? There are so many grammatical errors. There also wasn’t enough time for character development. Conversations were summarized, rather than written out, so it doesn’t feel natural when feelings develop between the FMC and MMC. I would only recommend it if you just want a short read with some steam and if the poor grammar won’t drive you crazy.

Duty isn’t always a chore. ❤️

It was fine. Not a whole lot of world building or plot but not a bad read! Reminded me of reading fan fiction.net back in the day.

If it had been any longer, I would dnfed this. Spelling errors galore.

chat.. did y’all read this?

A short story, so we won't judge it too harshly. The characters were pretty true to themselves all the way through, but there wasn't any depth to them. Not a lot of time to establish it tho, so I get it. The plot was just a prelude to the smut, which was a little too romantic for me, considering the characters barely know one another.

Sugar, spice, and everything nice

This story was so sweet. The position they're in is so weird, yet they do their best to make it a positive situation and end up discovering that they have real feelings for each other. I love that Calan came to Levana before they were 'required' to do the ritual and that they started to form a relationship. Their love really blossomed into something beautiful, and of course, their ritual was oh, so spicy!

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The first half really had me going and I was super invested but by the time the second half came around I sadly found it lacking and was struggling to get to the end of the story. I also just wanted to know WHAT HAPPENED TO THE FIRST BATCH THEY TRIED!

I don’t know if the author meant to write it this way but I personally feel like there was no world building, no plot or character build up. I feel like I was thrown into a book in the middle of the series and had to double check I was reading the first one.

The sex scenes were alright but nothing impressive. The storyline was okay but nothing to keep me on my toes I honestly am surprised I finished it and didn’t DNF it.

I see there’s a second and I’m probably not gonna pick it up and read that one either.

Just a no from me

Waste to read

The hard work that was put out by the author felt rushed as short..

Cute as vanilla-romance short story with spice 2/5

As not much erotica it feels like it’s written by someone who details sex… this is more of a romance… storyline and plot was all over as trails off as to the narration.. imaginary parts got to short to cut off… There was lot of grammar errors…

Was not my taste as i did read the second book to see if it got any better…. Just no

This is a good story, but be prepared for strong eroticism. The characters are interesting, the plot is straight forward, and the premise is continuing the bloodlines of the witches as well as the health and well being of the village. I definitely recommend this book, unless you are against eroticism.

I picked this up on a stuff your kindle day. It had multiple grammatical errors and typos that I felt could have been picked up by a simple spelling and grammar check on Word.. there was no real character development or storyline to me. Truly just a short sex story. Very quick read if you’re looking for something along those lines.

This has the potential to be a cute little spicy low-angst paranormal romance, but there just wasn't any depth to it. Very much a case of 'tell not show'. I don't have an issue with a slightly flat plot if it's intended to be mostly smut, if the smut is good. Again it had the potential but fell short.

Despite the story being short, the world build was nice and the characters likable. Understandably the author couldn't go into too much detail and focused on the main point of the story, which was the relationship between the FMC and MMC.

The spice was fine and the story short and sweet, overall a nice experience. A short read after a heavier one was a good choise.

Cute, Spicy Novella

This was such an uplifting little spice. The overall thought of the story was a good one, but there were some things that didn’t add up or make sense. If it has been slightly longer it might have tied better. However, I really liked it and the spice scenes were thoughtful and cute. Will read the rest of the series.

Nope…

I really wanted to like this book it had potential, but definitely be short. at times the storage has seemed all over the place and it didn’t flow very well. I wouldn’t recommend.

I’ll have what she’s having .. thanks

I started this book just thinking how sweet the story was ….. then wham! Bam! Thank you ma’am! Gonna go see if my husband wanted to come home for lunch today ;)

I found this to be more romantic - the sex scenes were cute. Adorable to read how the characters grew into a loving couple and I adorned how the female witches were always helping. Not sure if this was a final version but there was a handful of grammar errors.

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I liked how it was written with enough description, it's sweet and spicy enjoyed listening to this one, will definitely look for the others in the series

I did enjoy the story aspects of this, but I'm not huge on romance/smut which this contains a lot of. Plus the spelling errors took me out of it at times. But this is a decent short read

For a short smutty story, it was fine. 🤷🏻‍♀️

Grammar issues galore toward the end. Cute but eh. Not what I was expecting for an erotica.

Loved it!

This was such a good story. I really enjoyed it. Even though it's short, it was still very good. If you like witchy story's I recommend this!

This was a great little palette cleanser for me after some heavy books. Lots of errors unfortunately but mainly enjoyed it!

I’m convinced this book was never edited. It was hard to read with so many spelling and grammatical errors.

Excellent pace, excellent read! The words flowed well, the story wasn't too fast or too slow, it was beautiful! I look forward to more from this author!!

Ugh. It just wasn't that good. So many typos just kept me from enjoying it.

Just proofread before you publish.

It just felt like a rushed fan fiction.
I cannot recommend. Sorry.

This book started out so strong and sucked me in, but then it really fell off halfway through and I was deeply disappointed in it.

DNF at 13%. This is a me-problem, not the book.

Quick decent read